Yeah that's a very fair point! Again I really appreciate all the detailed feedbacks!!! <3
Usually a story consists of 3 elements:
- Characters
- Plots
- World building
As you pointed out in this and the first posts, in this story I didn't do enough writing on the world building, it's only natural that it failed to help the readers explore the world and ensure we're on the same page:) That will be one of my goals in the remastered game to fix this issue in addition to clear some loose ends in the plots!
I might have some free time around June this year to start working on it:) Currently I'm studying a music composing course in the spare time, the course will finish around April.
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Since you mentioned it, if you are curious -- the fairytale is more or less a sugarcoated version of the real history of that kingdom. You might notice that the endings of Miss Witch in the past are very different:
- In the fairytale: Miss Witch married Prince Aidan and they lived happily ever after.
- In Brannan's memory: Miss Witch was burned on the stake, he didn't mention what happened to Prince Aidan but he never liked him.