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Just played, finished and enjoyed what's there and I'd like to throw in my two pennies worth regarding this post and last. So I don't know if you need to rework the Enna or not, you do but that's kind of what I want to say. 
We just don't know Enna, her motivations or largely her emotions towards anyone or anything.

I'd hazard a guess that that is really where the hostility came from (undeserved imo but people on the internet gonna be people on the internet). You do know Enna through and through and as a central figure of your creation she'll be important to you, I can well understand why you'd feel dejected by folk not liking her. 

I think you missed a trick by focusing on Moran rather than Enna in what is there but that's no big deal at this stage. All you really need to do is give folk a chance to learn to love the character you've created. What we see is currently a confusing mystery, which as far as I can tell is intended, and she can possibly remain as such but for people to grow to love her they need to have something to love. 

Either way I'm looking forward to seeing where this goes. Good luck