Hello, I managed to play your game all the way to the ending and was impressed by that choice of twist. I decided it was right for me to write a review. It's a little long, but I think the extensive feedback would be beneficial.
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1dMumfbK7tDjVJrgXdvlyv90nDIWvS2_O6KdAzN70q0E/...
Let me know what you think. Best of luck.