Hi,
Glad I could help! I'm looking forward to seeing the character sheet.
Typically periods go inside the quotation marks. Example pg. 7 or simply a "Calling." At least in America -not sure if other countries do this differently.
Pg. 11 it looks like there is a double space between "have a" and "maximum" in the Max Resolve description.
Anyway that's all I caught!
Logan