This was a really bittersweet story. I had a suspicion after the "baseball" conversation, and was pleasantly surprised to see I was correct. Mr. Crow and James are both very charming characters, and I'd say you executed the theme really well.
Gameplay wise, it was quite fun! I had a great time wandering around the forest looking for parts, and the calming music and delightful art only added to the experience. I do think the jump height and speed was a little... off. It made controlling James a little difficult at times. But overall it was a delightful experience!