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I don't mind him calling Suzu (a) cutie at all. It was just too often for my tastes. It felt forced to me.In normal conversation you don't usually use the (nick/pet) name that often.


This being practically the only criticism I have just shows how good this is.

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It feels naturally to me during writing but I guess that's a bit of a subjective thing. I'll keep an eye out going forward to see if I'm maybe overdoing it.

I'm glad you like CH otherwise. :)