I'm not much of a reviewer, but I did quite enjoy this game. I've never been huge on SoL, but I think what made this work for me was the characters. The best way to describe it is you wrote them like an ensemble TV show--the characters have enough of a wacky personality to be interesting, but it's not kept to so rigidly that it feels forced and fake. Also, having gotten into VN's from Japanese ones, I'll be frank it's just nice to have the protagonist not be a jerk.
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Thank you so much for your comment! I'm glad you enjoyed the characters; it was a bit tricky trying to give everybody a decent amount of screentime to show off their personalities haha
I also noticed it's a pretty common trend for the male protags in Japanese VNs to be rude or sarcastic, so I made a deliberate effort to make Taiki a little nicer. I'm glad it paid off!