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Not just the scenes, but the plot, setting, and atmosphere is certainly there for it too.


The main character is literally given the title "slave", is branded, and bullied by a dominant hot succubus-waifu. He gets beaten and dominated by a bunch of battle maids too. They all talk about endurance training him in the future as some sort of foreshadowing. He's on a short leash as he's given his mission. The outer plot has already deep-dived into this theme.

The inner plot too: A hot queen on a throne who doesn't seem to outright deny that she keeps certain assets. The main character rescues someone, but still manages to end up under her anyways! And then followed by a long T&D session out of his control without spoiling anything. And so forth, all while under the scornful gaze of a mean--but well-endowed--goth girl.


Not making a judgement here, just suggesting to keep an open mind as the project tries to find its initial footing that it ticks a lot of boxes to a certain niche taste. Some folks are really into that. Advertising what it already excels at might help build up some initial momentum. Maybe it was unintended (I would guess you were aiming for a corruption theme initially), but accidents can be happy accidents. Don't be afraid to go either way.


Still, will be looking forward to how this story develops with content, routes, options, etc. Good luck!

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I imagined Mc was going to be something of a loser, but the way you describe how things happen is worse than I thought haha, thanks for that description.

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Its a hard judgement to make. The MC does stand up for himself, but has the rebelliousness physically beaten out of him. His initial emotional weakness from the sudden turn of events is also quite literally hypnotized out of him so he can serve better as both a personal slave toy and a knight.


It's probably too early to call and will depend on future story version beats. But before the whole adventure, he was down on his luck before being whisked away. Its all out of his control now, and there is a small comedy of errors happening because of all these circumstances outside his control.

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Yea I honestly am very put off so far with the mc...  he is just a cowardly skitish all bark zero bite loser so far.   So far it seems he has spent almost the whole time cowering as every female he comes across steam rolls him.   The lil sissy cant even see the upsite of being one of only a handful of dudes in an an entire world and spends his time eihter whining about whatever or literally shaking and skeered like a kicked puppy in a back alley.