I wanted more money and got insta gameover, but I played a second time through and won.
Here are some of the things I jotted down, obvious I know you didn't have a ton of time.
- I didn't really like being what looks like AI art baited into the game and then that game art not matching up
- The game UI needs some love. Small things would go a long way. Such as better using screen space given the bulk of the game is going to be text.
- If you're using Godot, I suggest looking at a plugin called Dialogic. You'll be able to make these choice based dialogs look very nice.
Best of luck creating more games in the future.