- Overall: That's some great writing !
- Fun: Getting through the battles and reading the story is fun!
- Visuals (Graphics): I like the crisp and clear pixel art! Also the screen shake adds some great juice. Perhaps you could add some old school pixel art effects, like a sword slash.
- User Interface: The UI is great and I like the scrolling text box, I can go up and re-read things I forget.
- Audio: Nice old school sound!
Great work and keep it up! Please check out my game when you can :D