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Phamyne301 days ago(+3)

[squeals in fanboi] 😖 Edgar, my beloved~! Gosh, can he pleeaase cook for me in that outfit every morning?? 😳 Love the new CG, btw~ 😉

I'm enjoying the world building xou've added 🙂 but might I make a suggestion? The whole explanation about ferals, purbloods, mythicals, hybrids, and originals was a bit confusing 😬 I mean, I understood the whole concept, but I think that scene could use a little attention.

RTS continues to be a feel good VN for me ☺️ and I'm excited for what comes next! 😁 Keep up the good work~!

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Ez3301 days ago (1 edit) (+2)

Hi there!

Thank you!! ♥ ♥ ♥  This is the kind of comments I like the most (on the same level as compliments :B), but really, they help me a lot!

The world I created is shared with three other stories, and sometimes I forget to clarify things/explain properly what was not yet said in them but in the others. So. again, thanks for pointing out this detail! For me it's very difficult to identify what might be off and sometimes it's frustrating to know that something is wrong but not knowing what exactly xD

I was going to add images next to a diagram style explanation, but I didn't get there with the times. As well as the gallery which, despite being half functional, is not really ready yet heh~

Needless to say, I'm working on that part to make it easier to understand :D

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Phamyne300 days ago(+1)

Xou're very much welcome 🙂 always happy to help another writer. And I totally get where xou're coming from, especially when xour story has a colourful history 😋 sometimes xou wonder if xou wrote it down in the actual tale, in a spin off of the original story, or if xou left all that extra information inside of xour head 😅

The diagram idea could work very well, and it would certainly add something fun and different to xour VN, but I do think all that scene needs is another 1nce over 😌 all the information is already there, so just a little rearranging and clarifying certain points will make it cohesive. 

And it's nice to know it's taken 3hree different stories to come to this point! 😁 If xou're anything like me, then I'm sure xour other tales have helped to build the foundations of the universe xou've created 🙂

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