Its rough around the edges, but it got soul! I can already see great improvement in drawings from Cliffside screenshots.
In terms of writing i cant really judge it, since i lack any expertise in this field, but i enjoyed reading this one.
Lastly, i think the game part was executed rather good, having different options for five endings is quite a lot for the first project.
10 nostalgia points out of 10! Blast from them past!
I hope you will keep your Flash Era art style )