Hi, I've enjoyed the story so far!
However I wanted to add that in chapter 2 during the dinner scene the game seems to freeze up/ the dialogue just ends. Specifically starting from the line "The next course is much better—at least in visual. It’s a soup, thick and rich looking. A flower is placed in the middle. It at least looks appetizing. The smell is also promising." it offers only one dialogue choice, a romantic one, which seems unrelated and unspecific to any characters which when clicked then goes to a blank screen.
If this is just because the game is still a wip/ this is just as far as the story goes for now then no worries, I just thought I'd let you know.
Curious to see how the rest of the story plays out! Take care