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chouchousen
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Hi, I've enjoyed the story so far!
However I wanted to add that in chapter 2 during the dinner scene the game seems to freeze up/ the dialogue just ends. Specifically starting from the line "The next course is much better—at least in visual. It’s a soup, thick and rich looking. A flower is placed in the middle. It at least looks appetizing. The smell is also promising." it offers only one dialogue choice, a romantic one, which seems unrelated and unspecific to any characters which when clicked then goes to a blank screen.
If this is just because the game is still a wip/ this is just as far as the story goes for now then no worries, I just thought I'd let you know.
Curious to see how the rest of the story plays out! Take care
The plot is kept vague enough to have you curious but not entirely out of the loop. The visual of a destroyed dilapidated city filled with fleshy red ooze is very interesting and had me wishing I could explore more. The choice of ambient droning music fit very well especially when spliced with the radio call.
My only real desires come from wanting to see this expanded upon. Perhaps some clearer graphics, doesn't have to give up the pixelation completely I just want to see things a little better. Also I feel like it would've been interesting to be able to interact with the radio, perhaps mess with channels or have a more distinct call from the final message (getting more pieces than just the beginning as you get closer).
Regardless, I still fully enjoyed this and think you did a great job both atmospherically and story wise.