It's has an okay plot and on okay flow of the story but I was hooked a little, that's why I made it until the end of the update. Now, what I don't like the most is the freaking overreacting, super exaggerating, stupid and shitty lines of the MC. I mean, it's an adult visual novel so there's a lot of foul words coming by but jesus, MC's lines are so overwhelmingly childish like...is the dev trying to be so funny? Or, perhaps, did the dev intend to make the MC childish, clown and brainless as much as possible? If it's true, then, god what a horrible combination..MC with a below average face and has a shitty, bland and infuriating humor. As I said earlier, the story is alright, have pride on that dev cause a lot of AVN devs can't do shit when it comes to storytelling.