Any updates regarding the other avn of yours called My New Memories?? The last update was such a bittersweet moment
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The story is near good and it's flow is going good until the introduction of Hunter. Like who the fuck is Hunter and is he something useful in the story? Is he that significant?...and why the fuck a random girl named Eden who's so over the heels with him? This is a harem AVN, right? Meaning all the girls you've shown to us should be the property of MCs including the girl who's inlove with Hunter and I also sense that this dev is making a mini-harem for this dude Hunter with the appearance of this Eden girl, Mary(since he outrightly rejected our MC) and her two daughters. If that will be true, then, dev should go to hell and his shitty story ideas...
It's has an okay plot and on okay flow of the story but I was hooked a little, that's why I made it until the end of the update. Now, what I don't like the most is the freaking overreacting, super exaggerating, stupid and shitty lines of the MC. I mean, it's an adult visual novel so there's a lot of foul words coming by but jesus, MC's lines are so overwhelmingly childish like...is the dev trying to be so funny? Or, perhaps, did the dev intend to make the MC childish, clown and brainless as much as possible? If it's true, then, god what a horrible combination..MC with a below average face and has a shitty, bland and infuriating humor. As I said earlier, the story is alright, have pride on that dev cause a lot of AVN devs can't do shit when it comes to storytelling.