I may be biased:tm: as a member of the DnD group mentioned (and proofreader, hohoho) BUT I really love Jaunus and Anastasia as characters and I can't wait to learn more about them both outside of the context of our group! I liked the foreshadowing, you have a way of laying things out that's like "hmmm, wonder what's gonna happen" without hammering people over the head with it!
Can't wait for more, and I'm so so glad we could help inspire you <3