Really interesting sound design and feel, I enjoyed the entire flow up to 2:40! The following section with the sitar kind of felt disconnected to the rest of the piece, and took me out of the world you had built up until then. I would love to get more context on what the final section is trying to portray in your piece. Overall, I really love the unique atmosphere and flow of this piece, great job!
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Thanks for the feedback! My original plan was for the piece to be two mini-movements (Approach and Ascent, thus the title. Very concert band lol)
The ending is the way it is because I joined the jam halfway through and just ran out of time to really flesh out the second half of the piece. It’s underdeveloped vs. what I wanted it to be. I only did a rough mix, too. It’s a great foundation to finish up for my portfolio, though!