Nice vibe and beat, I like the overall feel and direction of this music a lot, and the structure flows well too! The main thing for me was the mix and the panning going on. I think the percussion is a bit too much at the front of the mix, and it sometimes distracts me from the rest of your music. Also, the panning is a nice touch, but when combined with the louder, piercing style of sounds you used, it gets a bit distracting as well. I think my ears were having a hard time figuring out if I should focus on your music, the panning, or the percussion, kind of like a sensory overload. The actual music is really great, I just think this needs some tweaks to the mix and mechanics so its greatness can really be brought out!