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The whole feeling at the beginning is mysterious and dark. It has a bit of secret of evermore vibes to me. This could be in a hot underground passage or level. Nice! :)

I like it's loose and everchanging feel. For me it seems the shaker is a bit too upfront. But it has nice variations and never bores you or overwhelms you. Well done!

Sounds great! :)

Nice rhythmic pace, and I like the part with the tension. It gives the song a good variation and raises the listeners attention. nice job!

When is the release of the game? ;) Is this your own voice? I like the style, reminds me a bit of barry white. :)

This could be really fitting to some sort of relaxed space game! My favorite is Dark Territory :) Well done!

Really like the mix of different instruments and sounds! They give this a cool contrast. A bit more variation in the drums could make this one a bit more outstanding I think. But nice creative work here!

Nice sound! I like the little bassline you got there going. The synths that come in at about the half seem to bite with the lead melody (frequency wise), maybe you can work on the synth with an eq or put it a octave down? Otherwise nice work :)

Ardour can be another option for a DAW (which is what I use)

This could really be a lo-fi hiphop track even! I like the melody but a bit more variation (turnaround or part B) would make this one quite cool! Hope to see you in the next jams! :)

Oh yeah this definitely has some RTS vibes! I like the variation you put into it. It gives me the feeling that I have to do something and the enemy or time might not wait till you are ready. Nice one!

for a crunched jam, this still sounds great! The drums give this whole thing so much intensity. And I like that you went with a spooky theme rather than something chill. :) There must be a ghost girl I am sure!!

I see  a Zoom H1N? so you went out and recorded the background noise? I really dig the beat and the futuristic/mystic feeling it gives. It also has so many nice elements, making it so rich. The melodies at the end are also really great! Nice mixing as well.

I take the strangeness as a compliment, as in meaning differnt from the usual ;) Actually while improvising the melody, I was in a kind of trance like state. Sometimes I get lost in this process. Maybe the melody is meant to summon a creature from the lake ;) Thank you for your great comment!

thank you, mentioning golden sun and chrono trigger is compliment enough :) I always like to play around with paning. sometimes I overdo it a little.

thanks! I certaintly don't know how to jam on a guitar ;) But it sounded to my ears like a guitar solo.

I love that it is loaded with energy! :) And I really like the samples, and we need more cowbell :D Absolutley see this in a action game. Nice job!

sounds like you really put quite a lot of thought and work into this, so nice and soothing.

I think your heart is at the right place :D I like the happy tone these have and I think these are musically not bad at all. The first three tracks sound a bit too similar to me but the last two are pretty good in that regard. Nicely done, especially with beepbox!

I like the overall chilling vibe this has. Maybe some variation in the drums could make it a bit more "lively". It sounds well mixed to me. nice one! :)

it really is quite adventureous! but I like the variation you built in. I can see this track playing in a game. Nicely done!

yes, that is a lead you are correct :) who knows maybe there is something happening after the song is done... like a boss fight :D Thank you for your feedback.

I like the happy mood this gives off. well done. You can try to add a little variation in the piano (adding a b-section or changing the ryhthm or the chords)

big fan of FM sounds here! I like the breakbeat and the catchy groove you made. Only thing I could imagine would be maybe a lead part or solo section. But this would be the cherry on top :D

really enjoyable and I like the musicbox melodies. Also good mixed I think

Like the little breaks in between, they give this a nice pace. Nice bass line! :) 

The SoM soundfont is so nice, I thought using it as well.

It has a good drive and makes my head bop. I can really imagine an interesting story behind this track.

Yes this grooves! I like the style. Could be a bit more "structured" but it is very nice. :)

it is meant to be a bit odd, due to the mix of city and jungle + train. But still, I could pick a different instrument. Thanks for the feedback!

I like the mix and the sound. I can't complain about the bass. :) A really different part (with more variation) could make this a bit more spunky. But still great work!

yes this bass sound is awesome! :] this gives off a cold vibe and seems fitting for a city setting. Adding a lower energy section, without the bass, might create some anticipation for the bass when it comes back in. Maybe you can use a highpass filter for that? It is still a cool track! I like it <3

Anytime! :)

Really spooky! Cold and liveless as the skyscrapers are! Gives a nice mood, I could imagine to reduce the volume for the "sirens" a bit and maybe add a few more different or changing elements to it. Or modify the sound of the sirens slowly over time to generate some change. This is a really nice soundscape!

this is like a roller coaster theme and fits quite nice to a train :D It has quite a jazzy feeling, maybe a bit more structure or at some parts less instruments could sound richer. As it seems a bit crowded at times. But it still vibes well!

nice job in LMMS! <3 The bass sound is great and the harmony flows quite nicely! For me some noises seem to stick out a bit too much, other than that it is really enjoyable!

with lyrics! That's so nice. You added quite some effort. Did you "Master" it? You can try to compress your voice or the guitar or both. I would have expected some sort of B-part but that's fine just how it is :) Great work!

Oh I like the instrument sounds! :D It has a nice vibe and gives off an adventure, explorer feeling. Only thing I can critize: at some parts the lead instrument seems to be a bit too loud (can be my ears too) ;)

thanks! I did only mixing and limiting. seemed to work quite well 

It really transfers the feeling of an upcoming conflict/battle. Also sounds like some kind of trailer music to me. Really nice composition!

Really like the danceable groove and the instruments are well mixed together and form a whole.