Thanks for the feedback! My original plan was for the piece to be two mini-movements (Approach and Ascent, thus the title. Very concert band lol)
The ending is the way it is because I joined the jam halfway through and just ran out of time to really flesh out the transition and second half of the piece. It’s underdeveloped vs. what I wanted it to be. I only did a rough mix, too. It’s a great foundation to finish up for my portfolio, though!