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I enjoyed playing your game and I'm really glad that someone interpreted the theme as this memorizing concept! I had a similar idea myself but than did something else. :)

Since you asked for feedback I'll give my best provide some:

  • First of all: Great thumbnail! We all know that when it comes to publishing games, marketing is maybe even more important than the game itself. So great job here! I really can see this thumbnail beeing used as a YT-Vid-Thumbnail or something lol.
  • The game is about memorizing and comparing two pictures essenially. But you've managed to combine the gameplay with a story! This is how it always should be in polished games! Awesome!
  • As a gamedeveloper we always want our game to be user-friendly, meaning a user should always know what to do. You added a tutorial in the start explaining which doors do what. But one forgets it pretty fast. On the second floor I was already like "ok which door was for similar again?" - And I don't think its just me. I think you should add signs above the two doors on each floor so noone gets confused again!
  • Great Job on the animation! I love how Zach carries his little briefcase back and forth!
  • In terms of game-progression: I'm not quite sure, but I think the dificulty of a floor does not correlate with its number right? This is something that could be improved! Meaning on the first floors the changes are obvious - they are many of them etc. and on the last floor there is only one little change, like adding a pencil (maybe even on the carpet so its harder to see)
  • I can't see why you said your music "sucked" - I think it fits the vibe of the game perfectly!
  • It's a good thing to add a joke at the end, like the one with "don't pet my cats!!!" - This leaves the user with a laughter, so a good impression is left! awesome! (Also I totally tried to pet them - but you put an invisible border there.
  • Last thing: It's a bit weird that you respawn on first floor after beating the game... It would be better to return to the main-menu maybe, or to see a victory-screen, maybe where zach sits in the background starting his new job. idk.

Hope the feedback was helpful!

Thank you so much. This comment is very helpful. I'm glad you enjoyed playing it. 😁