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Great game, but the main point of this comment is to point out that there are a few errors in the Chinese translation. I didn't play much yet so these errors are all found in the "family" route up until where you unlock Hercules' side story.

When Harold first called, starting from the line "Nevermind. I'm at my boy...err, my roommate's house. His dad is local and offered to put you up.", the dialogue seldom switches between Chinese and English. Here are all the lines that I've discovered so far:

"I'm your only son... Anyways I'll see you later dad, love you."

"I'll be fine... My dad is on his way. And Sigmund has offered to let him stay here."

"W-we might be... one day."

"Fine..."

"Ah... I see your point."

"Hey! They're not that nasty..."

"Oh...yeah I don't ever have to deal with that."

"Oh, I never married..."

"Um..hear about...dinner" (I find it funny that the dots here are at different elevation, I think it's because you missed one dot right after "um")

"Oh, er...dinner. Yes, it is...a, umm, it will be...delicious?"

"Okay, just umm...Don't mention anything about us just yet. I want to tell my dad when the time is right."

"Back in the kitchen..." (Narration)

"I think it's going to be just enough...he's a big eater."

"Well...umm, I wanted to go fool around back at the dorm."

"Oh...Okay, but I do have to get some research done first."

"And you're not..." (after reading the history of the island)

"-huff- So hard..."

"But I'm not a deer..."

"I'll say.... are you..are you still cumming?" (one has one dot too many and the other one dot less)

"Earlier...back at the Deckard's residence." (Narration)

"Otherwise, I wouldn't know how to get there..."

"Well that just sounds so much better than just plain vanilla..."

"Sigmund leans over the sleeping stag. (blah blah blah)" (Narration)

"As you wish..."

"A few more agonizing minutes pass..." (Narration)

"The next day..." (Narration)

"I don't know...I'm going to call the company he was supposed to be meeting with."

"One moment...Ah yes. Harold canceled. He mentioned he landed a larger contract."

And that's all for now. I might continue to list more, if you don't mind.

Again, nice vn, keep up the good work!