Hey there, thanks for playing and for leaving such a detailed feedback! It will help me a lot. The other comments so far has been kinda mixed, with some people finding it confusing and others loving the mystery and the puzzles, so I'm not 100% sure how this game will evolve in the future... but having ideas on how to expand on it will surely help a lot with at least making a decision!
A lot of people noticed the pages problem, but I haven't solved it yet since the rating is still going on. I'm considering fixing it anyway though haha
Your point about the pages being too blown-up also makes sense, and should be easy to fix. I'm also considering other ways to guide and hint the player, maybe I can think of something that solves everything... well, we'll see. This would also make it harder for the pages to NOT be seen, which happened quite a lot too. The glow outline is a good idea, it would also add quite nicely to the mood!
Also, thanks for rating it so highly and even sharing the game with other people. I know that doing this is a very, very ocurrence in game jams hahaha
Cheers! More to come in the future 🙂