I got into the computer screen, but couldn't do anything with the text files, computer icon or recycle bin on there, I'm not sure if that was coded yet or not. I imagine the note with the roman numerals was meant to do something with the VHS tapes but I couldn't click on them to modify anything. I know you said it was unfinished, so I don't know what all was planned. Some ambient noise in the background or sound effects for the different areas could make it more engaging. I like the doubling effect when you mouse over things. For a mostly text-based story, I personally like the words to appear in sequence as if someone is typing rather than a paragraph appearing. I don't know if that is even a possibility with whatever engine you were using.