Honestly pretty disappointed. I feel there's a way to write the whole "screw everyone else, i'll save the person I love and run away somewhere!" but this just felt bad. The stupidity of the mc, the carelessness of not taking additional guards, the damn sex scene 5 seconds after allowing cultists to summon moloch or whatever were the opposite of what i wanted lol
Not to mention the sheer amount of chances they were given. The bear could have smashed that guy's skull in a second and then came to rescue the mc, the mc could have tricked the cultists or called for backup.I mean they have to keep him alive if they want to use him as bait..
Like i'm a sucker of edgy stories but this story clearly is trying to paint the mc as some selfless savior hero, so why does he act like a selfish dumbass that will get millions of people killed by hellbeasts? If i was roderick i'd be raging mad the mc decided to save me and usher doomsday. Roderick still has relatives alive, does he not think the mega helltide or whatever this spawns will kill even more people?
It's like you tried to make some kind of mc that attempts to be the hero and responsible king, but just ends up as dumb reckless selfish maiden in heat. I have no idea where this is going. Some kind of love power redemption arc?
The whole "oh we will get the entire world killed but at least we have each other :))" was just the opposite of chef's kiss
Well at least i must read the next update lol