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Good controls! I liked the game a lot. So much frustration haha.

Some critical feedback:

  1. Mouse disappearing in the main menu for WebGL  is disorienting. If they should use only keys, then there should be text for that.
  2. The art seems like a great follow-along from BTP. I've seen many learning developers try to emulate what he does from YouTube videos, but they rarely pull it off. I had to do a double-take of your username to make sure it wasn't one of his games! It is great that you did so, but maybe for the next jam, try to branch out and develop your own style! I actually give him that feedback for a lot of game jams since he tends to stick to his Edmund McMillen-inspired comfort zone. Push yourself into new styles! The art should support the gameplay. Don't slap the same artwork on every game.
  3. Confused what happens when I got all of the colors. I respawned a couple of times before it went to the next scene.

Overall, great job with your game! I loved the music and artwork.

Congrats on your entry!

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Hi, thanks for the feedback, everything you said there was true. I did take inspiration from BTP and will try to branch out in my following games - at the moment i am not too good of an artist and emulating his art style seemed the easiest option for a game jam. Feedback is always appreciated :)