woah, a game in Unity!! im impressed. i tried making a visual novel (ish) game in Unity at some point too and the amount of details i had to think of was just overwhelming :"D so im very impressed you managed to pull it off! just curious, did you have to implement the dialogue system from scratch or did you use some additional tools? c:
the text effects are so funky!! i loved the unexpected "DOES THIS NOT ENTERTAIN YOU" from Axel in the fire-spinning event, made me laugh :"DD the text reflected the mood of the scene perfectly.
oh and the pun in the game name is a nice touch 😁
the end part with the ball seems to have some bugs, i got the repeat of the ritual after i "failed" the Ellis romance route. might be worth looking into it
but overall a very nice game!