Thank you for playing it. Like I told Phoenix, my favorite thing in older rpgs was to find all the flavor texts for examining everything (especially if it gave me the all-powerful Elixir), so I wanted to have that for other players. Give them little bits that aren't always story-dependent but are fun to read. I've watched/read a lot of murder mysteries (like Law and Order and Murdoch Mysteries) and wanted to keep a pace that was easy but still felt like it was moving toward something definitive. I'm glad you enjoyed the conclusion; it was probably the hardest part to write.