This was an interesting choice of subject and there were many little historical details that gave it a rich feeling. I feel like I learned a lot. And I appreciate the effort you made to post it in Spanish and English.
I think the reason there haven’t been other ratings yet is that was a bit tricky to figure out how to play it. I normally use the Itch.io app for downloaded games, but the app wouldn’t let me install it. Downloading the .rar, and then opening the html file worked, though. I haven’t used Twine before, but it seems that the html file here should be able to work as an embedded game on itch. I believe it would either have to be uploaded alone or inside a zip archive and renamed index.html? (https://itch.io/docs/creators/html5)