Wow, thanks for the detailed feedback and bug reports! Will definitely get on those. Glad you liked what was there, a lot more has been added since! It did indeed look different, I posted like two screenshots in the thread about a month ago where it was a more realistic style, but it looked kinda shit, so I went with the anime style, hopefully it doesn't look too 'soft' for a horror game. Also, there are supposed to be sexual undertones to the vampire asking her to bed, haha. Its a vampire story after all! Glad you picked up on it though, was worried it would fly past people. And shalln't is the old form of shan't, but good catch on the other grammar errors!
Will review yours when I get the chance.