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A good concept for someone who wants sweet bubbly fantasy romance. It's aesthetically solid, sound, UI, art style, writing, are all bubbly-cute.
Also, I do enjoy that there are moments of phone UI, or a sort of 'mini game' of designing a bouquet to spice up the normal visual novel reading format. All in all, despite not being into overly sweet cute romance, I was impressed with the overall quality.

Now onto the flaws.
The biggest one is that the game just kind of... ends abruptly very quickly. I took breaks so I couldn't measure the length, but it was maybe 15-20 minutes? I haven't judged the NSFW version because it's paid- but if all the rest of the content is hidden behind that paid version I would rather at least some sort of short ending or conclusion. It's a version, not a demo, right?
It's even more wildly jarring because it's the same song in the scene prior to returning to the title screen.

On a subjective writing note: I want the choices to mean something. Maybe even just a throw away line from Anya about Cam trying Luka/etc's favorite. Something to world build or any other ideas.

Unrelated to any serious judging, hit the skip-text at phone for mass popping noises for the giggles.
I am also mixed if this fits the horny game jam theme, but the main character is maybe lowkey horny on main for a waitress so I feel kinda fits?

TLDR: Good polish and direction, needs more substance.

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Wow, thanks for taking your time writing such detailed feedback! I'm glad you enjoyed it. I'll keep those things in mind in my next game :)