I have seen your work on DeviantArt previously and whilst your usual style isn’t to my personal preference, I can’t deny the effort and work put into this. Great work all around, you have managed to make something unique and I would highly recommend others play this through as well. There does appear to be some locking out of certain routes at times, but I imagine those will be patched out quickly. I can’t wait to see part 2.
I would like to add to your attention however that it would be great to see some more events/interactions occur between the girls, but I imagine you would have something along those lines in planning alrady.