Hey, I decided to directly just play the "finished" version, since I won't be rating the games I'm playing anyways.
- I enjoyed the artstyle a fair bit, and the first lines clearly tell me what the game is about! I feel the UI for dialogue was a bit uninspired, but I doubt it had any real focus from you guys this time around. Would it be part of the re-design for this project?
- I enjoyed setting people on fire, although it took me a second to figure out how to do it. I was just dragging the torch rather than clicking at first.
- I like that there is a disclaimer of what "should have been" in there, but after I saw it a few times, I wondered if it was a good idea to refer to this within the game, and if it doesn't break immersion. I did enjoy the quality of the writing within the game, though, props for that! 
- Ran into this bug(?) during this scene, and thought you might want to check it out. I couldn't quite figure out how to progress beyond this point.
Overall, had a great time trying this one out. Very fun take on the theme, and revenge was served both hot and cold! Thanks for making it, and persevering to finish it even past the deadline!