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Oh my goodness! I absolutely love this. You did such a fantastic portrayal of a wartime setting with lots of details that got me thinking while I was reading. It was super immersive, and the art was simplistic yet effective and super charming. Plus, I adore the retro-feeling this work carried within it. The characters were three-dimensional and captured my attention straight away, as I got pulled into their narrative.

BTW, I also included an even more detailed review for you! (:

Thanks again for creating this! I enjoyed it immensely.

novicearts317 days ago (1 edit) (+3)

Hey hanako,

Thank you so much for this feedback! It's very encouraging to hear you enjoyed the story. That helps me a ton!

One question:

I'm still new to itch io, so I was wondering where I could find your detailed review... I cant seem to find it.

Edit: found the review, it was posted in the submissions feed :)

novicearts317 days ago (1 edit) (+3)

So I've had the chance to read your review, and thank you so much for leaving behind a thoughtful piece.

Your mapping of what stood out to you helped clarify what parts of the story got through (and thankfully it sounds like it got through just fine).

In the future if I write more novels or story heavy stuff I hope you don't mind if I send it your way as well. I really like how you break down details.

hanako316 days ago(+3)

You're welcome. I'm glad it was useful to you.

Sorry about not replying right away, I was tired and went to sleep, so I only saw this when I got up. Good to hear you managed to figure out where the review was located on your own.

I definitely wouldn't mind leaving more break-downs/analyses for you, as well. Since sometimes seeing different POVs from readers can be enlightening to perceive how others view work differently. I may do more in-depth reviews for as much people as I feel like doing during the course of NaNoRenO 2024, too. I'll see how it goes.

Thanks for the reply.

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