Hi! I'll base my """review""" on the fact that this is your first RPG maker project.
It was cute actually, I liked the chasing scene and the minigame was simple but well thought.
The idea that taking cig butts from the ground to save game was also cute, and I liked that you put some descriptions around.
On another note, though, since you made it very short I would've put a lot more thought into mapping - there are some bookshelves over others and the plants let you walk over them and on the walls.
It is a nice first project though and you did a good job with the eventing, so congrats!