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It's really dangerous to invert play and quit, I was about to give up the game. I've seen this in another game of the jam but after you hit play there was a window asking you if you wanted to quit, I think that's less mistakable with a crash.

I didn't get the story to be honest, I mean you start in your house saying that you want to leave the place, then you are in a city and some kids say that you're going away then you are in a fantasy word with creepy rabbits to kill. I just don't get the relationship. I mean, I can guess that you are a lonely kid that wants an adventure to feel less lonely so you make up some fantasy world and a quest but if that's the case you have to explain it better.

The game itself is a little poor in my opinion, you have to slash some rabbits, jump on 3 platforms and shoot some rabbits with fireballs. Then you meet the game that says it wants to be the player and you're going to be the game. I didn't genuinely understand what that's supposed to mean. If I go on with the story I made up before maybe you are the game because you invented all the fantasy story but in reality you're just some kid in a room playing with his immagination. But then again, why the game becomes the player?

I just want to know what was the idea behind the game.

The graphics are poor and I don't know if that's deliberate for the theme of the game or not.

The music is weird and again I can't tell if that's wanted or not.

The controls are ok but if I spam click the attack button the sound effects repeats five times before the animation repeats. 

It's cool that you participated to this jam because you can learn a lot of stuff, just keep practicing!

First of all thanks for playing my game, I know there are a lot of mistakes but I didn't have a team and it was my first game. The story didn't came out as I expected, I wanted to create the idea that the kid (the player) is just a lonely person that everyone hates, so he wants to leave, then to leave he can either follow the game instructions or not, I imagined 2/3 levels but I didn't have time to make them, so these instructions are just the road you choose at a certain point (when the game tells you to go forward to exit). At this point if you didn't choose the game instructions you'd end up in a boss fight that the game puts in front of you to stop you to actually exit, but if you do follow the game, then he'd go on with his plan, becoming human, and the only way is to swap his place with the player. Unfortunately it didn't turn like this in the end. For the main menu button, I don't think it's so dangerous to swap them, for the bad graphics and stange music, it's just because it's my first approach to them, so I'm not really fast and good. Thanks a lot for the feedback and I'll definetly keep practicing!

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Ok I get it now, the story is nice it is a pity that you didn't have time to put it down the right way. I understand this is your first time and you should be proud of yourself to have been able to complete a game all by yourself. You should consider gettin some partner for future games so you don't have to do it all alone. If I had to code by myself I wouldn't complete even the title screen (which is bad for our game ahah).

Hang in there!