I absolutely love the story you told in this one! The grammar was a bit off in places, and the British dialects for the characters were a bit all over the place. In a note by the victim, he used "their" instead of "his" or "hers" to describe the killer, which didn't make sense since the victim would have no reason to hide the killer's identity like that. Other than those things, though, I loved it! "Ho!" still has me laughing, the game over screen is hilarious, and the music was very fitting. :)