The concept is good and I thought the hook worked. The story involved is cinematic and there's a lot of useful info included on the page. Honestly, I just had a hard time with the layout, finding the right text to go with the locations, and figuring out how the maps went together, I think this aspect is unnecessarily confusing and I might go for a simpler layout. If I was going to run this, I think I'd have to create that for myself. But the art style does have appeal.