Well, I'm a sucker for emotional rides, but for me that whole thing was waaay over the top. The narrator's voice acting was professional, but incredible corny from start to end. The mother's voice was rather cringy. Even the music felt as a rather bland tear jerker. I'ld really encourage you to attempt a bit more subtile approaches in the future. This is just meant as feedback, I don't mean to be hateful or overly negative here. Good luck with your next games! :)