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okay once I realized the resolution was weird and I had to scroll up a bit, I got the game working just fine. Since you are considering putting more time into this I'll try to have helpful opinions.

I think the gameplay is strong, polished and follows the itch horror formula well. I have nominal interest in the plot, although it is formulaic (which is not necessarily a bad thing but the end is visible from pretty far out). I am also not sold by the horror elements. I cannot explain why (because its more of a feeling) but I suspect it's because they are pretty inoffensive environmental changes and theres no feeling of danger, fear, urgency or unease. And when they do affect game elements (milk to meat in the dark) it ends up being somewhat confusing and annoying for progression.

some nitpicks include:  [W]/[S] to toggle on/off is a bit strange. Could just be [W] to toggle both states. Various typos throughout including the spelling of "Willson". The telegraphing for Level 6 [the meat level] is somewhat unclear and you kind of stumble into the solution by chance.

I recognize I don't actually give helpful tips here to change anything and just voice largely my own opinions (so feel free to ignore it all).

It's a good release and I did enjoy playing it.  Strong mechanic.

Hi Propel S

Thank you for your feedback. This is exactly the kind of feedback I am currently looking for.

You've listed some great points that I need to think about. I am currently writing a game concept for a full version where I will also include your points! You have helped me a lot.

Thank you!