It's a good story at the end of the day, I think it's a heartfelt sweet narrative with some interesting body horror endings interspersed. Sometimes I feel like the choices telegraph one thing and then the player character just goes ballistic in another way, but it does circle around usually.
I love the art style, it is well-fitted to the story and writing. I know others have mentioned the length but I think its a perfectly fine length to iterate through- especially when using Ren'py features - which is why they exist for VNs.
For endings, I would put 1/X endings everytime you get one; just a thing I expect with ren'py games.
Great Release~ hope youre proud of your work.