Wow, really awesome atmosphere! I fucking suck at that minigame half way through, but I stuck it out becuase I wanted to see where the story was going, and it was a pretty interesting ending! I wasn't a huge fan of the writing, I think it would have been a bit more engaging with about half the dialogue cut, especially the "...b-but..." stuff. You don't need to detail the exact thoughts of the protagonist at all times, let the player sit and think about what's happened instead of telling it to them! I did quite enjoy the animations and the overall story and vibe, so other than some quirks with the writing, I really enjoyed and thought that this was a really great entry :)
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Hi, I'm glad you enjoyed the overall atmosphere and mood of the game. For the writing, I wanted to keep a slow pace in order to reflect the state in which the player lays, but my hand slipped off :/. I will keep in mind your suggestions next time, thank you so much for your feedback, it means a lot to me! <33333
Good luck! <3