Visuals are really well done.
I'm not sure if I really "get" the story.
Towards the end, the text was changing at the same time as the cashier, so I went to read at the same time as the image was changing, and I missed it like 5 times in a row.
I'll echo the mini game being really unforgiving. I did beat it fairly quickly though, I think that it's fairly intuitive. The ball just needs to drop faster when you click.
....I also think fewer periods at the start of sentences.... lol
Hi, thank you for leaving a comment letting me know your experience :))). Unfortunately the minigame was left quite unbalanced as I really didn't have much time for that, but I'm glad you don't suffer from skill issues and beat it quickly (marry me) :3.
For the text........yea..........I should use less.........dots................
Apart from being silly, I wanted to give some dialogues a slow pace, and planned to do so by implementing a dialogue system capable of adjusting the text speed. But I didn't have much time for that either, so I thought of using dots, and at the beginning it worked quite well, but then my hand slipped just a tiny tiny bit, and suddenly my dialogues became full of dots like my face at 14 :(.
I will make sure to fix it in the future, so it doesn't feel so clunky to read.
Hope you enjoyed it overall, if I missed something from your comment feel free to tell me, it's almost 3am for me and I'm fried. Thank you sooo much again for your feedback and good luck! <333
