I loved this game! My spouse encouraged me to comment with possible errors that I noticed while playing, so here's this post, which wouldn't otherwise have existed.
“Anyways, I really did just wanted to check in.” This should be “want”, not “wanted”.
It’s possible to look at the entrance to Gail’s office, but there isn’t a description there.
My skill tree didn’t highlight the Edge skill after I attained it.
My spouse is also the one who told me to play this, after encouraging me to pivot one of my characters in a book I'm writing into being a private detective. She (the character) is considering a change of career while being located to potentially get involved in intrigues. The discussion of what careers she might seek was the topic. We ended up discussing what someone might do with their lives if they're torn between seeking safety and taking risks. Detective work came up in that context.
I may have to play this game a bunch to see if I can write my first detective character.
EDIT: Also, I found a typo on my second playthrough. "(...follwed by a sudden electric jolt that flows up your arm and over your face." The follwed is in the text!
And another one! Maybe this is character speech, but it surprised me out of Gail. "And if they is ignorant of Guild politics, and commits a faux pas..." Should Gail say "if they is"? I think this should be an "if they are".
And another one! There is a "they is" out of Charity as well. Unfortunately, when I went to edit the comment this time, it disrupted my exact location in the game, I think by triggering the page to reload... Oh, my autosave works. Good. "(Despite their protestation, they is clearly enjoying the attention - rolling on their back, legs twitching."