I’ve spotted a few more things over the last couple of days.
There is a discontinuity between the dialogue and images when Amy asks the MC to watch her dance. In the seventh frame/paragraph, it states “You take a seat as she begins to dance, moving in long graceful movements, in perfect sync with the music.” However, in the subsequent images, the MC remains standing during the performance, as he’s visible in mirror.
Next, during the MC’s birthday event, Claire talks to him about the equipment she needs for the club. During this, she says that the cost of delivery is a couple of hundred dollars, as opposed to the $100 price we pay in the store.
Also, thanks to Episode 2, I’ve just realised the cinema isn’t highlighted on the map.