I think the game loop is the perfect amount, I was just starting to get bored when I realised "oh wait..." and some things started falling into place. The story is simple, but I do think it works well.
I think the actual scares needed a bit more work on them. I think the first abduction stays just a bit too long and the sound effect was just a bit too "normal" to fill me with terror. Promise I'm not shilling for them, but I used the free sampler from PMSFX to create some proper stings for my project which I felt help give a bit more OOMPH to an effect.
Again, really enjoyed it!