The story and character dialog quite good, got mention MC how to rise again.
For gameplay, need to add somethings (optional, because I think not so important. Or can be ignore my one if other player give better option):
- Send some characters to other area and collect resources (random chance to obtain rare materials).
- Add a mission list to show character's request that already accepted in future.
- Remark how many days will start blood moon (in mission list until mission fully cleared), even player knew it will started after each 10 days. The words can be turn red when left 3 days.
- Add "!" for character's location on the map if his/her special event is available in future.
- Add status beside character's relationship value. (Example: >10 = Lovely or Loyal)
- Current version only can use prisoner. Add option for punish or good care the prisoner (if got scene, would be perfect).
Then, the game will looks like masterpiece (maybe) ~ :D