So, I posted on Steam that I would come here and give an honest opinion on the game as you were having issues with someone giving one star and complaining there needs to be a "white" character skin. I cannot seem to find the link to give stars, so I will post here instead. Fact: MC is white enough. He looks like a tan white guy to me. (I am white) So that idiot always asking for a white main character must want a ghost. lol. Ignore the idiot. Like I said on Steam. Probably a 13 year old kid who is looking to just cause you grief. Now on to the actual honest review. Story is very good. It pulls you in fast and keeps you engaged. Very few issues with wording and typos. Very easy to read. Characters are unique and good looking. Art isn't sharp and crisp, but I know that you will go back later and do details and make it look clean in the end. After all, this is not a finished product. Choices do matter a bit, as I could see that what is chosen to be said can effect the character that is being spoken to. That is a bonus. Makes the player feel involved and want to make the best choice possible when talking to a character. Between the story, art, and choices, I would give this project 4 stars. It shows great promise and I can't wait to see how it turns out in the end. Keep up the good work!