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You received a 5 star review from me. Fantastic work. Cannot wait for more!

Honest Review.

Went through this in a week and I can say this. Great writing, great visuals, and the intrigue is better than the sex scenes. And the sex is pretty damn good! That says a lot from me when I feel that 90% of VNs nowadays seem solely focused on being petty fap material. I am completely locked in on this story and cannot wait for there to be more. The only issue I had at all with this is one or two words missing from sentences and the fact that every elbow and knee looked like it belonged to someone who needs serious lotion. Lol. Keep up the fantastic work!

Playing this leaves my wondering a few things... 

Why is the MC so filthy and unlikable? 

Why is dick is always dirty and nasty? BATHE! 

Why does his attitude towards women in general suck? Even in the most delicate of times (like his life is on the line) he is a degenerate and thinks with his dick! 

Why is he made out to have an infection or STD? If semen smells or tastes fishy, it is time to see a doctor! 

Honestly if it weren't for where the storyline is going in the intriguing parts, all I would want to do is beat the MC's ass!

I have rarely screamed as hard as I did with this particular cliffhanger. I NEED MORE!

I never use mods with the game. I had to re-install and am checking things now. Thx!

Thanks. I'll try that

I keep getting "An error occurred during installation runtime error: slice bounds out of range [:-1]" when updating. Please help.

Sadness flowing. This game had some true promise compared to most other games. I had looked forward to more story and great art. This game will be missed.

Sadly, I only speak English. But what I have seen that has been translated was done very well. This game and its story shows promise. Can't wait for a full translation of the story. Well done.

The story shows promise with it's concept. Currently the game jumps around through time too much to make much sense. I however look forward to the complete story.

Would be nice to have an "End of Demo" instead... Deleting

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So, I posted on Steam that I would come here and give an honest opinion on the game as you were having issues with someone giving one star and complaining there needs to be a "white" character skin. I cannot seem to find the link to give stars, so I will post here instead. Fact: MC is white enough. He looks like a tan white guy to me. (I am white) So that idiot always asking for a white main character must want a ghost. lol. Ignore the idiot. Like I said on Steam. Probably a 13 year old kid who is looking to just cause you grief. Now on to the actual honest review. Story is very good. It pulls you in fast and keeps you engaged. Very few issues with wording and typos. Very easy to read. Characters are unique and good looking. Art isn't sharp and crisp, but I know that you will go back later and do details and make it look clean in the end. After all, this is not a finished product. Choices do matter a bit, as I could see that what is chosen to be said can effect the character that is being spoken to. That is a bonus. Makes the player feel involved and want to make the best choice possible when talking to a character. Between the story, art, and choices, I would give this project 4 stars. It shows great promise and I can't wait to see how it turns out in the end. Keep up  the good work!

Pavi is <3!!

No. I just finished playing what there is and more of Ch. 3 will be coming soon.

I have truly enjoyed the overall experience of this amazing game. A few times I have gotten lost as to how to trigger content for certain characters, but I have found that exploring everything to get it to trigger is half the fun. The story is so damn good too! As I closed out some characters content for this version, I have audibly screamed "NO!" a few times cause I was so deep into the story. lol. I cannot express how many "feels" the story has given me. From emotional "aww" moments to complete rage at characters actions. The whole emotional spectrum. Cannot wait for more content! Keep up the terrific work Runey!